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About Scott Myers

Since selling his spec script K-9 in 1987, Scott has written nearly 30 projects for every major Hollywood studio and broadcast network. His film writing credits include K-9 starring Jim Belushi, Alaska starring Vincent Kartheisher, and Trojan War starring Jennifer Love Hewitt. In 2002, he began teaching screenwriting in his spare time. He won the UCLA Extension Writers' Program Outstanding Instructor Award in 2005 and currently teaches at the University of North Carolina in Chapel Hill. From 2002-2010, Scott was an executive producer at Trailblazer Studios, a television production company. He is co-founder of Screenwriting Master Class, a unique online resource for writers. Scott is a member of the Writers' Guild of America, west, and a graduate of the University of Virginia and Yale University Divinity School.

The story behind Go Into The Story

Awhile back the night before I started writing my next screenplay, on a whim I asked my three-year-old son if he had any advice. He looked at me with his huge blue eyes and without hesitation said, "Go into the story, and find the animals." I laughed -- pretty funny. Over time, however, I've discovered wisdom in my son's words. As writers, we do, indeed, go into the stories we create. And the animals? How about characters, plot, theme, dialogue, subtext, and all those other mysterious, magical creatures prowling in the jungle of our imaginations?

I've been an online instructor through UCLA Extension Writer's Program since 2002. This blog is largely in response to students who wanted to continue our conversations about the creative process. I offer it as a resource to them and any other aspiring writer, especially those interested in screenwriting and the magic of movies.

So let's go into the story... and find the animals!

Scott
May 16, 2008

The Katzenberg Memo, Part 15

In January 1991, Jeffrey Katzenberg, then the head of Disney’s motion picture divisions, wrote a memo that ended up being circulated throughout Hollywood. Even though it is 21 years old, it is remarkably relevant to the current movie business. For example, the United States was in a recession as we are today. The movie industry was confronted by numerous financial challenges tied to technological advances and cultural shifts, also as we are today.

Over the next few weeks, I will be posting the entire memo. If you have any interest in screenwriting or working in the film business, you should read it. Why? Because it gives you a wide-open view of how studio executives think. After all, any script you write and circulate in Hollywood doesn’t exist in a vacuum, rather it funnels through a system, one that operates based upon the business principles and practices of studio heads like Katzenberg.

Today: Rules

Rules

In this paper, I’ve implied a lot of rules — go for singles and doubles, hold down costs, keep hands on, watch your appetite, be wary of the Big Stars, pay ancillaries no mind, etc. Here’s one more rule — there are always exceptions to the rules.

Filmmaking is not a science. This memo is being offered as a reflection on and a re-thinking of our business. Clearly, there are going to be instances of “yes, but…,” as in, “Yes, I know this project violates Rule X, but the concept is so compelling that it’s worth it.”

But, to as great and extent as possible, we should try to adhere to a set of reasonable, rational rules. Not so much for us, but for them, i.e. the outside world.

If we exercise the necessary discipline to make some rules stick, then the people we deal with will have a clear set of expectations when they sit down to the table with us. By self-enforcement of a clear code, we will make it possible for agents to think, “As long as they treat everyone else that way, at least I know it’s not personal.” People will come to us understanding our terms and framework in advance. Or, if they don’t agree with our approach to business, they will avoid us and save everyone from wasting a lot of each other’s time.

And, if we are consistent in asserting our bottom line, in the long run we are likely to make less expensive and more profitable films. There is no way to minimize the long-term importance of being willing to walk away from any one movie. There are over 200 projects under active consideration at any given time at this studio. None of them is a certain winner, since there is no such thing. If we can’t make one, there will be another to take its place. We must always keep this in mind when we sit down to negotiate. We must always be willing to walk away at the moment that a deal no longer makes sense for us. For every project we lose in the short run, in the long run we are likely to get five others on terms advantageous to us because the other side will know that we mean it when we say, “That’s it.”

While there is always going to be some flexibility on many of the rules discussed in this memo, there are two rules that must never be broken:

1. Always exercise intelligence and good taste.

These are two things to never compromise. If we decide to make a “tent pole” movie, then let’s make it as intelligently as possible, with intelligent risk. If we choose to use a major star, let it be an intelligent choice for that role and for that movie. And, as we develop projects, let us always keep in mind the indefinable question of taste. Disney films mean something very specific. But, Touchstone and Hollywood films also reflect a certain entertainment ethic, one that we can be proud of and one that we should continually respect.

2. Reserve the right to fail.

We’ve become big enough and successful enough that no one movie can be the difference between profitability and unprofitability for our studio. If we are to achieve greater success, we must be creative. If we are to be creative, we must risk failure. Therefore, to succeed we must occasionally fail. And sometimes, not so occasionally.

“Pretty Woman” came on the heels of five consecutive failures. In the scheme of running this movie studio, those five failures were necessary for that one extraordinary success. And they were worth it.

If we remain intelligent about our projects and exercise good taste, then the failures will remain manageable. And we will continue to be successful.

Maybe studios have some rules. But for screenwriting, there are no rules. I have a lot of thoughts on this very subject that have been roiling around in my brain. I’ll post something on that soon.

That said, another quotable quote from Katzenberg: “Filmmaking is not a science.” Especially on the front end [i.e., the creative part].

To read Part 1 of the Katzenberg memo, go here.

For Part 2, go here.

Part 3, go here.

Part 4, go here.

Part 5, go here.

Part 6, go here.

Part 7, go here.

Part 8, go here.

Part 9, go here.

Part 10, go here.

Part 11, go here.

Part 12, go here

Part 13, go here.

Part 14, go here.

To read the entire memo, go here.



GITS Script Reading and Analysis Series: “The Sixth Sense” — Dialogue

This week we are analyzing the screenplay for the 1999 movie The Sixth Sense written by M. Night Shyamalan.

You can access the September 12, 1997 draft of the script through myPDFscripts here.

Today we discuss the script’s dialogue:

* What do you consider to be the most memorable lines, either good or… not so good? Why did they work – or not – for you?

* Any notable callbacks (a line used once, then used again later in a different context)?

* How about set-up & payoffs?

* Any exposition that caught your eye for being handled exceptionally well?

See you in comments for a discussion about dialogue in The Sixth Sense.

For Day 1 of our analysis of The Sixth Sense, go here.

For Day 2 on structure, go here.

For Day 3 on characters, go here.

For Day 4 on themes, go here.

NOTE: THIS SERIES AND THE USE OF SCRIPTS IS STRICTLY FOR EDUCATIONAL PURPOSES!



Great Character: Frank Booth (“Blue Velvet”)

One of the creepiest Nemesis characters in American film history is Frank Booth from Blue Velvet:

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Played with demented intensity by the late Dennis Hopper, Booth is a psychopath of the first order. Here is the IMDB plot summary:

A man returns to his home town after being away and discovers a severed human ear in a field. Not satisfied with the police’s pace, he and the police detective’s daughter carry out their own investigation. The object of his investigation turns out to be a beautiful and mysterious woman involved with a violent and perversely evil man.

That “perversely evil man” is Booth. He says things like this:

Don’t toast to my health, toast to my fuck!

And this:

Goddamn you’re one suave fucker!

And of course this:

Baby wants to fuck! Baby wants to fuck Blue Velvet!

And then he takes young Jeffrey (Kyle MacLachlan) for a ride:

But it’s this image by which we’ll always remember Frank Booth:

Dennis Hopper Blue Velvet

By the way, you might find this interesting: how David Lynch perhaps wrote Blue Velvet:

“For seven years I ate at Bob’s Big Boy. I would go at 2:30, after the lunch rush. I ate a chocolate shake and four, five, six, seven cups of coffee – with lots of sugar. And there’s lots of sugar in that chocolate shake. It’s a thick shake. In a silver goblet. I would get a rush from all this sugar, and I would get so many ideas! I would write them on these napkins. It was like I had a desk with paper. All I had to do was remember to bring my pen, but a waitress would give me one if I remembered to return it at the end of my stay. I got a lot of ideas at Bob’s.”

Frank Booth emerged into being from chocolate shakes, multiple cups of coffee, and lots of sugar? That make sense!

Any Blue Velvet fans out there? Still one of my favorite David Lynch movies.

[Originally posted February 18, 2011]



Daily Dialogue — January 27, 2012

“And that droopy thing over there, that’s my brother, Mike. We call him Joe College.”

– Sonny (James Caan), The Godfather: Part II, screenplay by Francis Ford Coppola and Mario Puzo, based on Puzo’s novel

The Daily Dialogue theme for the week is flashbacks, suggested by Alexander Gorelik.

Trivia: James Caan asked that he be paid the same amount of money to play Sonny Corleone at the end of the film in the flashback as he was paid to do The Godfather. He got his wish.

Dialogue On Dialogue: Clearly this is a good use of a flashback what writers refer to as a “callback,” a great way to mark where Michael started out as a character… and where he is now.



“10 Tips: Write an Unsellable Screenplay”

HT to @UnkScreenwriter for finding this link, a good reminder of some basic things not to do when writing a spec script:

1. DO NOT use 12 pt. Courier font.

2. DO NOT have lots of white space on the page.

3. MAKE IT LONG.

4. HAVE NO IDEA where you’re going with the story.

5. SAY IT, don’t show it.

6. DO THE DIRECTOR’S JOB.

7. DO THE ACTOR’S JOB.

8. DO THE PRODUCER’S JOB.

9. USE OTHER PEOPLE’S intellectual property.

10. “…and in the darkness BIND them.”

Go here to read the whole list and further discussion about each point.

What other surefire ways are there to write an unsellable screenplay?



2012 Sundance Film Festival: Day 7

Day 7 links!

Deadline: IFC Acquires Josh Radnor’s ‘Liberal Arts: Sundance

Deadline: IFC Acquires ‘The Pact’

IndieWire: Entertainment One Acquires ‘Wish You Were Here’

IndieWire: Review of “V/H/S”

LAT: Gina Rodriguez of ‘Filly Brown’ is the newest ‘It’ girl

LAT: Documentary on Paul Simon’s ‘Graceland’ screens at Sundance

THR: Sony Pictures Worldwide Acquisitions, Samuel Goldwyn Films Pick Up ‘Robot and Frank’

THR: Magnolia Pictures Acquiring Horror Flick ‘V/H/S’ for North of $1 Million

THR: AMC/Sundance Channel Celebrate Global Expansion

THR: Sony Pictures Worldwide Acquisitions, Samuel Goldwyn Films Pick Up ‘Robot and Frank’

THR: Review of “California Solo”

THR: Review of “Chasing Ice”

THR: Review of “Five Broken Cameras”

THR: Review of “Gypsy Davy”

THR: Review of “Payback”

THR: Review of “Red Lights”

THR: Review of “Save the Day”

THR: Review of “Shadow Dancer”

TotalFilm: Day 7

24 Frames: ‘For Ellen’ puts focus on the father



The Katzenberg Memo, Part 14

In January 1991, Jeffrey Katzenberg, then the head of Disney’s motion picture divisions, wrote a memo that ended up being circulated throughout Hollywood. Even though it is 21 years old, it is remarkably relevant to the current movie business. For example, the United States was in a recession as we are today. The movie industry was confronted by numerous financial challenges tied to technological advances and cultural shifts, also as we are today.

Over the next few weeks, I will be posting the entire memo. If you have any interest in screenwriting or working in the film business, you should read it. Why? Because it gives you a wide-open view of how studio executives think. After all, any script you write and circulate in Hollywood doesn’t exist in a vacuum, rather it funnels through a system, one that operates based upon the business principles and practices of studio heads like Katzenberg.

Today: The Rising Sun

The Rising Sun

Of course, the focus has shifted to hardware for a very good reason. The people who make the hardware have been buying up Hollywood.

This has resulted in a rising tide of hysteria and paranoia that has bordered on panic.

Let’s calm down.

The Japanese have been buying studios in the belief that if they can control the software, there will be great synergistic advances of vertical integration with their hardware. This may make sense if you’re in the auto business and you own the company that makes the sparkplugs for your cars. I contend that it simply doesn’t make sense in the movie business.

It all started when Sony was first on the VCR scene with its Betamax, only to lose out to the VHS format. Sony chairman Akio Morita has concluded that history would have been different if Sony had owned an American studio and therefore been able to direct the market by putting film titles on Beta tapes.

This thinking is absurd. By owning Columbia, Sony now controls less than 15% of Hollywood software output. Fifteen percent does not comprise the critical mass necessary to direct a market.

Beta didn’t lose to VHS because it didn’t have the software. VHS won, despite not being the first out of the gate, because of a superb manufacturing, distribution and marketing effort that ultimately succeeded in making VCR and VHS synonymous in the marketplace. And it was also a better product.

Now, Matushita is making what I believe is a defensive move by following in its competitor’s path and buying MCA. This is not unlike what occurred in our business a few years ago when many of the studios followed one another into the theater business. Like the Japanese hardware manufacturers, these studios believed that some sort of synergy/vertical integration magic would happen if they controlled the screens their movies played on. Ridiculous prices were paid for assets that are now declining in value.

Luckily, we stayed out of the theater business, sticking instead with the business we understand best.

And this is where the wisdom of the Columbia and MCA purchases is particularly questionable. The Japanese are getting into a business that is to some extent outside of their cultural context.

Filmmaking at its essence is about the conveyance of emotion. Not coincidentally, filmmakers by their nature are an emotional group — from the actors on the screen to the dealmakers behind the scenes. It is said to be a crazy business and most of its practitioners admittedly are, by normal standards, a bit eccentric.

The Japanese, on the other hand, culturally err on the side of withholding emotion. In saying this, I am not simply offering an American perspective. The Japanese are the first to tell you this about themselves.

This sense of discipline and self-control has no doubt been a major factor in achieving the Japanese economic miracle that has turned a small island nation into one of the world’s pre-eminent industrial powers.

But it is also why I firmly believe that the recent marriages between Japanese hardware makers and American movie makers may not be ones made in entertainment heaven.

There will be a chasm in the fundamental understanding of the movie business that will likely prove exceedingly frustrating for Japanese and Americans alike.

But, whether I am right in this expectation of incompatibility or not, one fundamental truth will continue to hold forth during the era of Japanese studio ownership: only the product matters.

If we at Disney continue to produce a successful slate of films, they’ll line up down Buena Vista Street to buy our products to display on every one of their new fangled gadgets.

We don’t need to be associated with hardware manufacturers any more than we need to be associated with exhibitors.

We only need to be associated with good movies.

Nice history lesson. And did you realize that for a time, two movie studios were owned by Japanese companies: Columbia (Sony) and Universal (Matsushita). Katzenberg was at least 50% right as the latter arrangement didn’t work out so well as after a five year ownership stake, Matsushita sold Universal to the Canadian company Seagram. Meanwhile Sony has owned Columbia since 1989 and after some rough years, they brought in John Calley and Amy Pascal, the latter of whom is still head of production, and the studio has done quite well for itself.

That’s probably the key: Sony was smart enough to hire people who knew the Hollywood culture and the film business.

The idea of ‘vertical integration’ still has a lot of power in the business community and ironically Disney has not been immune in purchasing since Katzenberg’s memo ESPN, Marvel and Pixar among other companies.

But this is my favorite quote from today’s excerpt: “Filmmaking at its essence is about the conveyance of emotion. Not coincidentally, filmmakers by their nature are an emotional group — from the actors on the screen to the dealmakers behind the scenes. It is said to be a crazy business and most of its practitioners admittedly are, by normal standards, a bit eccentric.”

Don’t get lost in the “eccentric” bit. We all know this. Indeed I’ve written two The Business of Screenwriting posts on the subject titled “They don’t think like you” here and here.

As screenwriters, the line to remember is this: Filmmaking at its essence is about the conveyance of emotion.

That, my friend, is worthy of tacking up at your desk where you right. This is straight from the mouth of one of the more influential studio execs in the last quarter-century, this is a core principle for him and I would think most of the buyers out there.

Of all the moving targets you try to hit when you write a spec script, apart from the strength of your story concept, I can think of no other more important element than this: Convey emotions. People who read scripts for a living get dulled from the experience, so many words, so many pages, so much crap. They are desperate to read something that shakes them out of their doldrums. They want to feel something.

I don’t mean melodrama. I’m talking about the whole variety of emotional reactions. If it’s a comedy, make readers really laugh. If it’s a thriller, scared the crap out of them. If it’s a drama, craft a deeply compelling story. And yes, this all pretty much comes down to what you do with your story’s characters within the context of the story’s central situation as characters are the conduit of a script’s emotions.

Don’t ever forget that fact: Filmmaking at its essence is about the conveyance of emotion. If there’s nothing else you take away from this daily grind of plowing through Katzenberg’s memo in its entirety, take this point to heart.

To heart… emotion… get it?

To read Part 1 of the Katzenberg memo, go here.

For Part 2, go here.

Part 3, go here.

Part 4, go here.

Part 5, go here.

Part 6, go here.

Part 7, go here.

Part 8, go here.

Part 9, go here.

Part 10, go here.

Part 11, go here.

Part 12, go here

Part 13, go here.

To read the entire memo, go here.



GITS Script Reading & Analysis: “The Sixth Sense” — Theme

This week we are analyzing the screenplay for the 1999 movie The Sixth Sense written by M. Night Shyamalan.

You can access the September 12, 1997 draft of the script through myPDFscripts here.

Today we discuss the script’s themes.

There are several of them. Which ones do you see at work in the story?

For those of you more academically inclined, how about this:

“Questions of Unreliable Narration in The Sixth Sense,” from Coral Houtman, University College of Wales, Newport, Wales

This paper will address two questions about the narration of the film The Sixth Sense. The first is: How far is the narration unreliable, tricking the viewer into a misunderstanding of the plot? The second is: How far is this unreliable narration consistent with the underlying thematics of the film, and the way these are addressed through the characters’ interactions and their interactions with the viewer? I will argue that whilst the viewer is tricked into perceiving events in ways that subsequently turn out to be false, they are actually being placed in a situation by the film-maker whereby they leave the cinema having had some of their prejudices questioned, their unconscious assumptions revealed. They thus achieve a catharsis whereby their traumas are integrated into a more satisfying state of closure. What I hope to show is that the narration in The Sixth Sense serves a consistent aesthetic, and its very unreliability at the level of plot demonstrates a deeper coherence functioning at the level of character psychology, motivated by the film’s self-conscious understanding and use of psychoanalysis. To this end, I shall be employing narrative theory and its understanding of how narrative comprehension in film depends on fulfilling a consistent set of expectations set up by the rules of the film and film-making more generally, in order to explore how the film disguises its own inconsistencies, but also using Lacanian psychoanalysis to test the rigour of the film’s psychoanalytic project. I shall argue that the ghost story in The Sixth Sense is a parable of psychoanalysis and the listening cure, and the film’s narration treats the audience, as well as the major characters, as part of the analytic relationship. In taking up this thesis, I am also relying on a signal of authorial intention from the director, M. Night Shyamalan. I read Shyamalan’s cameo role as a children’s doctor as the work of the text (what I shall call the implied author) directing us to make connections between film directing, and the psychoanalytic practice of the story. Shyamalan’s own background — the son of two parents who were doctors and who, according to Shyamalan wanted him to follow in their footsteps, and a wife pursuing a Ph.D. in psychology (Antonio 2000), creates correlations which encouraged me to look for a psychoanalytic structure in the narration of the film, as well as in its narrative. In my conclusion I shall be looking at how this particular reading of the film fits into the context of cognitive and psychoanalytic approaches to narrative and to film studies and whether these two diverse approaches can be reconciled.

For more, go here.

See you in comments to discuss the themes in The Sixth Sense.

For Day 1 of our analysis of The Sixth Sense, go here.

For Day 2 on structure, go here.

For Day 3 on characters, go here.

NOTE: THIS SERIES AND THE USE OF SCRIPTS IS STRICTLY FOR EDUCATIONAL PURPOSES!



The Business of Screenwriting: There are three groups of people in Hollywood

There are three groups of people in Hollywood:

Group 1: People who know nothing or next to nothing about story.

Group 2: People who can tell you what’s wrong with a story, but don’t know how to solve its problems.

Group 3: People who not only can determine what’s wrong with a story, they can fix it.

Guess which group a writer wants to be in.

A few caveats:

* Virtually no one in the acquisition, development, production or marketing side of the movie business would ever admit to being a member of Group 1. But they’re there. A tip to figure their identity: If you ask someone, “What’s the story about,” and they respond by actually telling you the story beat for beat, there’s an awfully good chance they don’t have a very good grasp of the concept of story.

* Most people in Hollywood fall into Group 2. They know enough about story to be dangerous. That is they can tell you at least some of the things that are wrong with a script, but often their solutions are way wide of the mark. The worst is when they suggest something that would force you to radically reinvent the story, but they can’t see how or why that doesn’t make the problems worse. “I know it’s called ‘Nuns With Guns,’ but why does it have to be nuns?”

* If you’re a writer, you hope you qualify for Group 3. A studio exec may be involved in shepherding a dozen projects or more through the development process, so they are looking at writers to be problem-solvers. Your ability to identify a story’s underlying issues and suggest solid, tangible ways to resolve those concerns will serve you in good stead in Hollywood.

However if you are a member of Group 3, you can not speak to people who are in Group 2 and certainly not Group 1 as if they understand story the way you do. You have to be able to break down your analysis and ideas into a series of graspable talking points. If you try to impress them with your deep understanding of the nuances of story theory, you will not only likely lose them, they will probably feel a great deal of discomfort sitting in a room with you.

Instead you must try to meet them on their level and shape your suggestions into digestible, bite-sized talking points. This is not to demean them in any way. You may know story, but you probably don’t know squat about business or the subtleties of networking. You have your talent. They have theirs.

And by the way, this is not only about Group 3 trying to communicate with Group 2 or Group 1 people, it’s also understanding the fact that studio executives have insanely busy lives, so being concise and on point is at a premium when dealing with them.

Bottom line: They don’t really need to know the ins-and-outs of story theory. All they want is for you to fix the damn script!

[Note: Are there producers and studio execs who are members of Group 3? Absolutely. And that can be both a blessing and a curse, the former because you benefit from their great ideas, the latter because they will want to explore every conceivable plot possibility, hopefully a beneficial process, but an exhausting one].

Now I can hear you asking this question: How do I go about becoming a member of Group 3? Apart from those of you who are preternaturally wise about story, movies, and screenwriting, there is really only one answer to that question: Immerse yourself in cinema. 

Not just screenwriting, but the entirety of movies.

See every film.
Read every book.
Analyze every script.
Study the business.
Think like a writer.
Think like a director.
Think like a producer.

You should envelope yourself in everything related to filmmaking and the movie business. In other words, you have to love cinema and follow that passion into the world of cinema.

That is until some pharmaceutical company comes out with a little blue pill called MovieAgra: The one pill to take to magically arouse your cinematic sensibilities!

Otherwise if you want to join Group 3, see every movie, read every book, analyze every script…

[Originally posted April 21, 2011]

The Business of Screenwriting is a weekly series of GITS posts based upon my experiences as a complete Hollywood outsider who sold a spec script for a lot of money, parlayed that into a screenwriting career during which time I’ve made some good choices, some okay decisions, and some really stupid ones. Hopefully you’ll be the wiser for what you learn here.



Daily Dialogue — January 26, 2012

“Keep your loving brother happy.”

– Frank (Henry Fonda), Once Upon a Time in the West (1968), screenplay by Sergio Leone & Sergio Donati, story by Dario Argento & Bernardo Bertolucci & Sergio Leone

The Daily Dialogue theme for the week is flashbacks, suggested by Alexander Gorelik. Today’s suggestion by Teddy Pasternak.

Trivia: The final duel between Frank and Harmonica is shot almost exactly like the one in Robert Aldrich’s The Last Sunset between Rock Hudson and Kirk Douglas, a film that Bernardo Bertolucci was a huge fan of.

Dialogue On Dialogue: Nothing like dialogue tied to a powerful talisman to pack a wallop.