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Great scene: The Usual Suspects


The ‘big twist!’ Is there any movie ending more satisfying than a scene sequence where you realize the writer has totally played you, set you up to think one thing, then through the course of events in the scene, methodically let you in on the secret the writer has carefully crafted and kept to him/herself. One of the best ‘big twists’ in recent memory is in The Usual Suspects (1995). Written by Chris McQuarrie, the movie is a nifty crime noir story with an odd angle to it: the real or mythological crime lord Keyser Söze.

Here in the final sequence, Roger ‘Verbal’ Kint, a limping weakling played masterfully by Kevin Spacey, prepares to leave a lengthy interrogation with Dave Kujan (Chaz Palminteri), U.S. customs agent.

Do you remember the moment you realized the truth about Keyser Söze when you first watched The Usual Suspects?

 Kujan pulls the microphone out from under his tie and puts         it on the desk. Verbal actually manages to snort a laugh,         but only briefly, overcome by an apparent wave of nausea.

                               KUJAN                   You're not safe on your own.

                               VERBAL                   You think he's..?

                               KUJAN                   Is he Keyser Soze I don't know,                   Verbal. It seems to me that Keyser                   Soze is a shield. Like you said, a                   spook story, but I know Keaton - and                   someone out there is pulling strings                   for you. Stay here and let us protect                   you.

                               VERBAL                   I'm not bait. No way. I post today.

                               KUJAN                   You posted twenty minutes ago. Captain                   Leo wants you out of here a.s.a.p.,                   unless you turn state's.

                               VERBAL                   I'll take my chances, thank you.                   It's tougher to buy the cheapest bag-                   man than it is to buy a cop.

                               KUJAN                   Where are you going to go, Verbal?                   You gonna run? Turn states evidence.                   You might never see trial. If somebody                   wants to get you, you know they'll                   get you out there.

                               VERBAL                   Maybe so, but I'm no rat, Agent Kujan.                   You tricked me, that's all. I won't                   keep my mouth shut 'cause I'm scared.                   I'll keep it shut 'cause I let Keaton                   down by getting caught - Edie Finneran                   too. And if they kill me, it's because                   they'll hear I dropped dime. They'll                   probably hear it from you.

         Verbal stands, mustering his shattered dignity and walks         towards the door. Rabin opens it for him from outside.

         For once Kujan cannot bring himself to look at Verbal. Verbal         turns to the door, stopping to look Rabin in the eye.

                               VERBAL                   Fuckin' cops.

         He steps out of the room and into the hall. Rabin follows         him.

         INT. HOSPITAL - DAY

         Daniel Metzheiser comes out of Arkosh Kovash's room with a         single sheet of 15x20 inch paper in his hand. He inspects         the sketch with great interest. He folds the edges of the         paper back to make it smaller.

         INT. HOSPITAL RECEPTION ROOM

         Metzheiser walks behind the reception desk without asking         the nurse for permission and helps himself to the fax machine.

         INT. DEPOT - LATER

         Verbal is downstairs in the depot of the police station         picking up his personal belongings.

         A FAT, WHITE-HAIRED COP is checking off the items as he takes         them out of the tray in which they are kept.

                               COP                   One watch: gold. One cigarette                   lighter: gold. One wallet: brown.                   One pack of cigarettes.

         Verbal collects his personal items and shuffles on his lame         leg toward the exit.

         INT. DISPATCHER'S OFFICE

         Jack Baer stands by a fax machine. A green light comes on         next to a digital display.

         THE DISPLAY READS: RECEIVING

         INT. RABIN'S OFFICE

         Kujan stares solemnly at the bulletin board, drinking from         Rabin's coffee cup. Rabin sits at the desk, sifting through         the mound of gapers as though considering organizing them         once and for all.

                               RABIN                   You still don't know shit.

                               KUJAN                   I know what I wanted to know about                   Keaton.

                               RABIN                   Which is shit.

                               KUJAN                   No matter. He'll have to know how                   close we came.

                               RABIN                   Keyser Soze or not, if Keaton's alive                   he'll never come up again.

                               KUJAN                   I'll find him.

                               RABIN                   Waste of time.

                               KUJAN                        (to himself)                   A rumor is not a rumor that doesn't                   die.

                               RABIN                   What?

                               KUJAN                   Nothing. Something I - forget it.

         Kujan shakes his head. He gestures to the desk.

                               KUJAN                   Man, you're a fucking slob.

         Rabin regards the mess of his office.

                               RABIN                   Yeah. It's got its own system though.                   It all makes sense when you look at                   it right. You just have to step back                   from it, you know? You should see my                   garage, now that's a horror show...

         Kujan is not listening. He has been staring at the bulletin         board, lost in thought, his unfocused eyes drifting across         the mess of papers, not looking at anything at all.

         EXT. STREET

         Verbal steps out into the sunlight, putting on a pair of         cheap sunglasses. He looks up and down the crowded street.

         People on their way to and from lunch, no doubt.

         Cars choke the street in front of the police department as         they wait for pedestrians to clear the way.

         INT. DISPATCHER'S OFFICE

         A single sheet of paper comes out of the fax machine, face         down.

         INT. RABIN'S OFFICE

         Kujan still stares at the bulletin board.

         SUDDENLY, Kujan's face changes. He leans in closer to the         bulletin board and squints his eyes. His face changes again.

         First a look of puzzlement, then confusion - finally         realization.

         The coffee cup tumbles from his hand. It hits the floor with         the SMASH of cheap porcelain. Coffee splatters everywhere.

         Rabin snaps out of his droning and looks up in surprise.

         KUJAN'S P.O.V.

         Kujan is staring not at what is on the bulletin board, but         at the bulletin board itself.

         His eyes follow the aluminum frame, mounted firmly to the         wall. One might note it's sturdy construction and it's         convenient size. Big enough to hold a lifetime of forgotten         and disregarded notes and facts. Years of police trivia that         has been hung and forgotten with the intention of finding a         use for it all someday. One might want such a bulletin board         for one's self. One would look to see who makes such a         bulletin board.

         Kujan's eyes are locked on a metal plate bearing the         manufacturer's name.

         It reads: QUARTET - SKOKIE, ILLINOIS Kujan's eyes flash all         over the bulletin board. He finds a picture of Rabin in the         far corner.

         He stands beside a scale in fishing gear. He proudly holds a         hand out to his freshly caught marlin. His eyes skim quickly         over and stop on an eight and a half by eleven inch fax sheet         of what must be a THREE HUNDRED POUND BLACK MAN. Kujan glazes         over his name, it is irrelevant. His aliases stand out.

         Slavin, BRICKS, Shank, REDFOOT, Thee, Rooster...

         KUJAN'S EYES WIDEN with sudden realization. He runs for the         door.

         His foot crushes the broken pieces of Rabin's coffee cup.         The cup that hovered over Verbal's head for two hours.

         Kujan is in too much of a hurry to notice the two words         printed on the jagged piece that had been the bottom of the         cheap mug.

         KOBAYASHI PORCELAIN.

         EXT. HALLWAY

         Kujan is sprinting wildly down the hall for the stairs.

         EXT. STREET

         Verbal looks behind him and sees ANOTHER COP standing just         inside the doorway, lighting a cigarette. The cop notices         Verbal and watches him in the way that cops look at people         they cannot place in the category of idiot citizen, or stupid         criminal.

         Verbal smiles politely, meekly at the cop and walks down the         steps into the moving throng.

         INT. DEPOT

         Kujan runs up to the desk where Verbal had only moments before         picked up his belongings. Rabin is right behind him, a look         of absolute confusion on his face.

                               KUJAN                   WHERE IS HE? DID YOU SEE HIM?

                               COP                   The Cripple? He went that way.

         The cog gestures towards the door.

         Kujan runs outside looking around frantically.

         EXT. SIDEWALK

         Verbal limps his way carefully across the sidewalk, avoiding         people as best as he can.

         He looks over his shoulder, getting farther away from the         police station. He can see Rabin and the cop on the steps,         looking around with strange, lost expressions on their faces.

         He does not notice the car creeping along the curb beside         him.

         INT. CAR

         DRIVER'S P.O.V.

         The driver's hands tap the wheel patiently. His eyes follow         Verbal as he fumbles through the crowd.

         EXT. SIDEWALK

         Kujan pushes and shoves, looking this way and that.

         EXT. STREET

         LOW ANGLE on the feet of dozens of people. Verbal's feet         emerge from the crowd on the far side. They hobble along the         curb.

         SUDDENLY, the right foot seems to relax a little, the inward         angle straightens itself out in a few paces and the limp         ceases as though the leg has grown another inch.

         CRANE UP VERBAL'S BODY

         Verbal's hands are rummaging around in his pockets. The good         left hand comes up with a pack of cigarettes, the bad right         hand comes up with a lighter. The right hand flexes with all         Of the grace and coordination of a sculptor's, flicking the         clasp on the antique lighter with the thumb, striking the         flint with the index finger. It is a fluid motion, somewhat         showy.

         Verbal lights a cigarette and smiles to himself. He turns         and sees the car running alongside.

         INT. DISPATCHER'S OFFICE

         Jack Beer pulls the sheet out of the fax machine and turns         it over, revealing the composite sketch of Keyser Soze.

         Though crude and distorted, one cannot help but notice how         much it looks like VERBAL KINT.

         EXT. STREET

         The car stops. The driver gets out. IT IS KOBAYASHI, or the         man we have come to know as such. He smiles to Verbal. Verbal         steps off of the curb, returning the smile as he opens the         passenger door and gets in.

         The man called Kobayashi gets in the driver's seat and pulls         away.

         A moment later, Agent David Kujan of U.S. Customs wanders         into the frame, looking around much in the way a child would         when lost at the circus.

         He takes no notice of the car pulling out into traffic,         blending in with the rest of the cars filled with people on         their way back to work.

         BLACK

                                   THE END

Now compare to the way the scene plays out in the movie:

[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_6SenP4DDg]

3 thoughts on “Great scene: The Usual Suspects

  1. I agree, great script and movie but a lot of the surprise was just basically because they never revealed any of it to us in the first place. We all learned it the same time as the cop, so of course we were surprised. It would have been harder to put all those clues within the entire script, maybe even impossible

  2. The editing is incredible in that scene. A lot of praise should go to John Ottman.

    I love that the coffee cup breaks 3 times — and you don’t really think about it, logically. You are so ingrained to the story, that it heightens the dramatic effect of that scene.

  3. The movie was very well made, of course. But I felt a little cheated at the end… the whole script was formulated to surprise the viewers at the very end and in hindsight it feels very artificial. I remember feeling suspicious of Verbal in the very beginning when he said he was a con man…. whenever one knows that a guy is a con man, I always keep suspecting that everything is being orchestrated and that the characters are being played. Then the whole movie spends itself in dissolving any such suspicion only to reveal at the end the 'surprise'! It can feel like being cheated… but what the hell it was great entertainment.

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