Tuesday, October 14, 2008

14 Screenplays -- Day 2: Pulp Fiction

Today is Day #2 of the 14 Days of Screenplays: Version 2.0. The script of the day is Pulp Fiction (1994), which won an Academy Award for Best Screenplay Written Directly for the Screen. Written and directed by Quentin Tarantino, the script is notable for its style, distinctive dialogue, and non-linear approach to the plot. There are a great number of things we can discuss about the movie. Let me focus on the plot to ask this basic question:

Why tell the story in a non-linear style?


The first time I read Pulp Fiction, I thought Tarantino had gone the non-linear route because it was stylistically cool. And indeed, it is cool. Arguably, this movie spawned an entire wave of cinemati storytelling, everthing from end-scenes placed up front movies (The Usual Suspects), movies which employ occasional non-linear elements (Out of Sight), to movies whose plot is told in reverse (Memento).

But after reading Pulp Fiction again, I've come to the conclusion that Tarantino, whether he intended it or not, hit upon non-linearity as the only way he could tell one particular subplot in the script, the tale which comprises the 'moral' center of the movie: That story involves the fates of Jules and Vincent.

Tarantino goes to great lengths up front, enormous gobs of seemingly inane dialogue (P. 7-17), to establish Jules and Vincent as sort of philosopher-goofballs, whose vocation, as it happens, is to whack people. So Tarantino has set us up to anticipate yet another post-modern, ironic take on violence, the breakdown of society, etc.

But what is really going on, in my opinion, is farm more traditional: A tale about morality and humanity, one guy who finds it (Jules), and one guy who does not (Vincent). The guy who finds it lives. The guy who does not dies.

What if consider Jules and Vincent to be co-protagonists. Both are confronted by the same story-turning event, the Fourth Man shoot-em-up scene which happens on P. 26, where the shooter bursts out and fires away. Against all odds and in defiance of all logic, both Jules and Vincent survive without a scratch.

Jules is convinced this is a miracle ("We just witnessed a miracle!" -- P. 115), but Vincent denies it, choosing to see the incident as "a freak, but it happens."

Jules is moved by the event to decide to change his lifestyle ("That's it for me. From now on in, you can consider my ass retire." -- P. 116), while Vincent is convinced that Jules is "freakin' out."

The fact that one of them chooses to change and the other doesn't -- that is the reason the non-linear approach to telling the story works.

By presenting the story's seminal moment up front, then moving forward in time to see how Vincent handles the event (no change in attitude) and his resulting death, underscores the importance of the story's other significant moment, one which plays directly to the script's themeline.

On P. 152, back in the coffee shop where the script begins, Pumpkin and Honey Bunny have drawn their weapons and are rousting people, pulling off their twitchy robbery. Eventually they come upon Jules sitting calmly at his booth, wearing his absurd "I'm With Stupid" T-shirt (Vincent happens to be off in the bathroom, a second time his gastro-intestinal timing impacts the plot, his other visit to a bathroom resulting in his untimely death). Pumpkin has his gun trained on Jules, unaware that Jules has his own gun drawn out of sight beneath the table.

Now Jules is faced with a big choice: He could easily blow away Pumpkin, an act which would in effect renounce his recent determination to live a different (moral) life; or he could try another more peaceful tact.

Tarantino literallly presents two potential futures: The first is Jules killing Pumpkin; the second is Jules talking his way through the situation, going so far as to give up his own hard-earned cash to the robbers, allowing them to go free (when Vincent returns from the john, he demonstratres that he still does not 'get' where Jules is coming from -- "Jules, if you give this nimrod fifteen hundred bucks, I'm gonna shoot 'em on general principle.")

The movie ends with the second future winning out -- Pumpkin and Honey Bunny do not die and make off with the cash they have thieved, followed by Jules and Vincent who wordlessly shuffle out of the joint, heading off toward their respective fates.

Bottom line, you, the writer, could not introduce Jules and Vincent in the coffee shop on P. 8 in the middle of a robbery and expect the reader to have any understanding of what the moral dilemma is, what the symbolic lay of the land is, what the story's thematic point is. No, in order to understand what is at stake in this pivotal moment, the reader needs to know more. Otherwise the impact of Jules' transformation would be utterly minimized.

So to sum up, what works so beautifully with the non-linear approach to Pulp Fiction is that:

* We get a chance to witness the opening shoot-out and wonder how it has anything to do with anything else for 141 pages -- until we finally see it pay off.

* We get a chance to meet Jules and see the ingrained violence of his world, setting the bar especially high for him to change.

* We get a chance to live with the Fourth Man's stunned expression after he unloads his pistol to no effect and his pursuant comment, "I don't understand," knowing that something odd took place at the end of that scene; again how will this pay off?

* We get a chance to live with Vincent who doesn't show a depth of soul akin to Jules (and ends up dying for his lack of humanity).

* We get a chance to see another tortured soul with a choice, Butch, who makes the right decision (dignity in refusing to throw the fight), then makes another and even harder choice (goes back to help save Marsellus, the guy who wants him dead), but whose 'moral' decisions result in earning him his freedom and the ability to live a new life.

All that story material, so when we rejoin the Jules' storyline, we 'get' Tarantino's moral landscape. When Jules has his life-altering confrontation with Pumpkin, and a single twitch of a finger could turn their little world into an instant bloodbath, we buy the meaning of the last words Jules says to the nervous robber -- "The truth is you're the weak. And I'm the tyranny of evil men. But I'm tryin'. I'm tryin' real hard to be a shepherd."

Pulp Fiction
is a great example of non-linear plotting that enhances the story.

So what's your take on the script? What dynamics did you see when you read it?

3 comments:

Kiwichick said...

While the tone isn't quite my cup of tea, I have great admiration for their style and technical brilliance. Certainly deserved their Oscar.

Désirée said...

I really liked the movie. But I couldn't figure out how the script could be understandable. Even though I'm a writer myself. The script is impressive.

If I was about to sell this as my first script I think I would not get it sold. Not because it is bad, but because it breaks to many "rules".

judy said...

Hi, Scott --

I agree with your take on the structure and the likely authorial decisions for the non-chronological order of events in Pulp Fiction.

But as I read the script I kept remembering my FEELING of dread some time ago as I watched the final scene of the movie unfold, and that leads me to some different thoughts to discuss.

My own suspicion at the time was that 3 possible futures were up for grabs. In addition to the two you noted, there was Future 3, and that was what I expected to happen: that poor Jules -- having made this remarkable day's journey and arc'ed away from a life of criminal violence -- would be whacked by these two twits Honey Bunny and Pumpkin.

As you noted, Tarantino "set us up to anticipate yet another post-modern, ironic take on violence, the breakdown of society, etc."

So that was the irony I was expecting, and it caused considerable tension as I watched the film.

In fact, I took Jules to be the Protag. His character was not the largest part, and it wasn't the most identifiable (ok, I loved John Travolta as Vincent. There, I said it.), but his was the most changed character. Plus, his was the only main character whose physical fate remained in question in Act 3.

We'd already seen Vincent die by the gun in Act 2 (although that hit-gone-bad that occurred later than the Act 3 climax). And at that time (sometime after the Denny's coffee shop climax) Marcellus -- the only other key character -- was still alive. Only Jules was unaccounted for. So, he could have gone straight and spiritual... or he could have been dead, shot by HB and P.

Anyway, as I read the script I got that same little uneasiness as we closed in on Act 3. Like, does this script end the same way the movie did -- or does poor Jules buy it? So I experienced the thing differently but enjoyed it quite a lot.

I also interpreted the Marcellus-Butch subplot in a different light. While the juxtaposition of the flashback to Butch's childhood and the post-fight scene leads us to believe he got "religion" or honor and therefore couldn't throw a fight, what seemed to be going on was very different.

In actuality, it seems, Butch was simply greedy -- and possibly a notch lower and gutsier -- than Marcellus. He was in fact cleaning up on the fight by not throwing it, as he'd been paid to do. Butch took took Marcellus' money to throw the fight, then leaked info about the fix in round five, then bet the money Marcellus had paid him on himself to win (as noted in the phone call about the six bookies), then beat his opponent roundly (to death) and was set to split with his girl, who also knew all about it.

In my interpretation, he was all about money and greed at this point. The remarkable events that transpired when Butch realized his gal had left Dad's heirloom honor watch back at the old apartment (in my interpretation) led to Butch's seeing of the light and salvation, such as it was.

By being forced into a crucible with Marcellus, with far meaner dudes in charge, then fighting his way out, then going back in a kind of "no man left behind" battlefield honor scene, Butch won Marcellus' grudging respect -- and his own future, as long as he stayed clear of Marcellus' turf. So I felt that was his growth and entitlement to his warrior father's and grandfather's watch.

Anyway, it was a treat to read the script. Long. Time consuming. But wrapping J. Travolta's inflections around the sides was great fun.

On to Day 3!