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Great Scene: "Rocky"

Last night, GITS reader-editor-writer-director and major movie buff Kevin Wild stopped by, so I asked him for a Great Scene. He said, “Hey, you should do some that came about because of budget issues.” And he immediately thought of the ice-skating scene in the movie Rocky (1976). As Kevin remembered it, the scene as written in the original script was supposed to include a bunch of skaters on the ice rink for Rocky (screenwriter, director and leading man Sylvester Stallone) and Adrian (Talia Shire) to circumnavigate. But Kevin said, “I think they had to cut the other skaters because they couldn’t afford the extras.” So I Googled “rocky ice skating scene budget extras,” and sure enough, Kevin was right. In this article from 2001, celebrating the 25th anniversary of the movie’s release, there’s this:

“It was like the independent movies of today — it was about taking a risk,” Shire said. “It wasn’t about having so much money at stake, where you tend to forfeit your ideas and solve your problems in a more formulaic way. In ‘Rocky,’ there wasn’t that much money. And because the risk factors were changed, little eccentricities were allowed to happen.”

One of those eccentricities, Shire said, was the memorable scene in which Rocky took her ice skating. The scene called for a crowd of people, but there wasn’t enough money in the budget to hire enough extras.

“That turned out to be something that just suited the scene beautifully,” she said.

Here is the scene as it was scripted without the extras.

               INT. ICE SKATING RINK - NIGHT
 
               Rocky and Adrian enter a deserted skating rink.
 
                                     ROCKY
                         Looks quiet, y'know.
 
                                     ADRIAN
                         I think it's closed.
 
                                     ROCKY
                         I think mebbe we're early or somethin' --
 
               From across the rink a CLEANING MAN yells at them.
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Hey, whatta ya doin' here -- we're 
                         closed... Yo, we're closed!
 
                                     ROCKY
                              (yells back)
                         Are ya closed to the General Public 
                         or to just everybody.
 
                                     CLEANER
                              (starts to walk over)
                         Hey, the rink is empty 'cause we're 
                         closed -- ya ain't allowed in here 
                         so do me a favor an' not stay here.
 
                                     ROCKY
                         Wait here, gotta smooth this guy 
                         out.
 
                                     ADRIAN
                              (softly)
                         We could go somewhere else an' --
 
               Rocky approaches the Cleaner.
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Yo, pal, what's with you -- The place 
                         ain't operatin'.
 
                                     ROCKY
                         Listen, I gotta problem. This girl 
                         ain't feelin' well, y'know -- The 
                         doctor says she should exercise, 
                         y'know once in awhile an' ice skatin' 
                         is the best thing --
 
                                     CLEANER
                         This a con?
 
                                     ROCKY
                         Look at her, ya can see she ain't 
                         feelin' good -- needs a few minutes 
                         exercise --
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Few minutes?
 
                                     ROCKY
                         ...Ten minutes.
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Ten minutes for ten dollars.
 
                                     ROCKY
                         ...Yeah, give 'er the Blades.
 
               INT. ICE SKATING RINK - NIGHT
 
               Adrian has on skates. Rocky follows her onto the ice. He 
               wears street shoes.
 
                                     ADRIAN
                         ...Aren't you skating?
 
                                     ROCKY
                         Ain't skated since I was fifteen -- 
                         That's when I started fightin' -- 
                         gotta watch the ankles. Yeah, fightin' 
                         use to be tops with me, but no more. 
                         All I wanted to prove was I weren't 
                         no bum -- That I had the stuff to 
                         make a good pro.
 
                                     ADRIAN
                         And you never got the chance?
 
               The Cleaner yells from the sideline.
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Nine minutes!
 
                                     ROCKY
                         Hey, I ain't cryin'... I still fight.  
                         Kinda do it like a hobby. See I'm a 
                         natural southpaw an' most pugs won't 
                         fight a southpaw 'cause we mess up 
                         their timin' an' look awkward -- 
                         Southpaw means lefthanded... But I 
                         guess in the long run things probably 
                         worked out for the best, right?
 
                                     ADRIAN
                         But you never had a chance to prove 
                         yourself.
 
                                     ROCKY
                         Absolutely.
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Eight minutes!
 
               Adrian slips and Rocky breaks her fall.
 
                                     ROCKY
                         I just dislocated my finger.
 
                                     ADRIAN
                         Ohh!
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Seven minutes!
 
                                     ROCKY
                         It ain't your fault -- I originally 
                         done it in the Baby Crenshaw fight.
                              (opens his wallet)
                         That's me fightin' Big Baby Crenshaw -- 
                         Big Baby was the size of an airplane 
                         an' I broke my hands on his head -- 
                         I lost, but it's a nice picture, 
                         don't ya think?
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Six!
 
                                     ROCKY
                         How 'bout some Cokes?
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Cost ya a buck.
 
                                     ROCKY
                         This guy is beautiful -- get the 
                         Cokes.
 
Adrian does a slight turn and Rocky has to speed up
and nearly falls.
 
                                     ROCKY
                              (continuing)
                         See, I ain't graceful, y'know -- I 
                         don't move good -- Stink as a dancer 
                         too -- But I can really swat, I hit 
                         hard, real hard, but I'm a southpaw 
                         an' nobody wants to fight a southpaw! -- 
                         Havin' a good time?
 
Adrian nods and is very nervous... The Cleaner moves carefully
across the ice.
 
                                     ROCKY
                              (continuing)
                         Y'know how I got started in the fight 
                         racket?
 
                                     ADRIAN
                         By accident?
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Here -- Three minutes.
 
                                     ROCKY
                         Yeah -- My ol' man who was never the 
                         sharpest told me -- I weren't born 
                         with much brain so I better use my 
                         body.
 
               For the first time, Adrian laughs.
 
                                     ROCKY
                              (continuing)
                         What's funny?
 
                                     ADRIAN
                         My mother told me just the opposite. 
                         She said, 'You weren't born with 
                         much of a body so you'd better develop 
                         your brain.'
 
                                     CLEANER
                         Time!
 
The Cleaner walks over as Rocky and Adrian get off the ice.
 
                                     CLEANER
                              (continuing)
                         That's ten bucks.
 
                                     ROCKY
                         I must be goin' deaf 'cause I thought 
                         ya said, 'ten cents.'
 
               Rocky hands him a dime.
 
                                     CLEANER
                              (weakly)
                         ...How 'bout for the Cokes?
 
                                     ROCKY
                         Charge it.
 
Rocky and Adrian start to leave. Rocky pauses at the door and
fishes into his pocket and hands over eleven dollars.
 
                                     ROCKY
                              (continuing)
                         Had ya goin', didn't I, huh?
 
               He grins and leaves.

That’s a great bit of business with the Cleaner calling out the minute count, then finally “Time!” It puts just enough comedy and edge in the scene to cut away any hint of schmaltz. And it adds a layer of tension on top of the scene which combines with the sexual tension playing under the scene. Wonderful stuff. Here’s the film version:

H/T to Kevin for the suggestion. How about you? Know of any great movie scenes that were inspired by or forced into being due to lack of funds?

And for all you Rocky fans, please feel free to add your stories — personal or otherwise — about this ‘small’ movie that created a huge sensation in 1976.

4 thoughts on “Great Scene: "Rocky"

  1. The famous baby on the steps scene in THE UNTOUCHABLES was a late sequence put in because they didn't have the money for the elaborate train chase scene that was originally scripted by Mamet.

    So since they were out of time and money, and Mamet couldn't be bothered (he was directing something by then) De Palma put in an homage to Battleship Potemkin, cheaper because it's one location, and designed the sequence himself.

    It became the centerpiece of the film.

    I wrote about it here: http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=999

  2. The first one that comes to mind is the infamous scene in Raiders of the Lost Ark where Indy shoots the swordsman rather than get into a protracted fight with him.

    The way Spielberg likes to tell the story, Harrison Ford was quite ill that day and said he had maybe an hour of shooting in him. Speilberg said, "Harrison, the only way I could do this in an hour is if Indy just shot the guy." That got a laugh from the crew, and so the change was made on the spot.

  3. Speaking of Spielberg, this wasn't due to lack of money, but the whole first two thirds or so of JAWS, where the shark is mostly unseen is so effective because the mechanical shark built for the movie malfunctioned so much that Spielberg was forced to shoot around it. Or maybe it simply wasn't ready for a long time, I can't remember specifically.

    The ultimate example of this has to be MONTY PYTHON AND THE HOLY GRAIL. They didn't have money for horses, hordes of extras and obviously judging from the solutions they came up with the movie is infinitely better and funnier for it.

  4. As for ROCKY, I'm ashamed to say that even though I'm a child of the 70s/early 80s and have seen bits and pieces of it, I've yet to see the whole thing from start to finish. I'll have to rectify that soon.

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