And my response:I’ve revisited your Narrative Throughline a few times since I took “Scenewriting” with you. For some reason, it just wasn’t completely clicking. Like I was reading it in a foreign language, I could make out words but the meaning was evasive. Of course, the more I read it like that – the more intimidated I was by it. Vicious cycle. I’m sure personal stresses at the time didn’t help (part of the reason I found digging into certain characters difficult).
So, tonight I picked up your lecture again for the third time since starting this class – again expecting most of it to go over my head. Then, on page four was my lightbulb moment!
What you describe is Military Basic Training! Why I hadn’t seen it before, I don’t know (okay, so I know).
The plot line is leaving home and entering a strange world where you’re yelled at and everything you do is wrong. Slowly, through trial and error, you learn to fold your tee-shirts into a 6″ square and make your bed so you can bounce a quarter off it…and you’re rewarded.
The themeline is they purposely take away everything you know about who you are, or thought you were, until you are a blank slate. Then they rebuild you into what they want you to be – what you always knew you could be but never had the discipline to attain.
It may not make sense this way to anyone else, but I’m sure glad I could finally read it in English
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Works for me! This is why I’m a proponent of pre-pro screenwriters reading and listening and watching everything they can about the craft — because you never know when some phrase, lingo, or metaphor will click with you.A key thing to remember: The foundation for the Reconstructed persona is in a preexisting state within the Protagonist character (or whoever else may be going through a transformation). That’s almost always part of their Disunity condition: They’ve been living on the surface, ignoring or suppressing their core essence ‘inside.’ The Deconstruction allows that ‘stuff’ to emerge. And since that ‘stuff’ is a constituent part of the character’s Authentic Self, once it’s tapped into it provides more power, vision, and strength than they ever generated in their Disunity state. The narrative’s build toward the Final Struggle pits the Reconstructed character in a big test to see if the transformation process took or not.
Another way of looking at it is through the lens of Dabrowski’s theory of “positive disintegration.” Dabrowski believed that in order to advance beyond “primary integration,” what we may call Disunity, a person has to go through a process of “disintegration” (Deconstruction – Reconstruction) in order to achieve “secondary integration” (Unity). That is a huge oversimplification of Dabrowski’s theory, but for purposes of this discussion basically works. The main thing is that what we would typically perceive as being a ‘negative’ experience — disintegration which can cause anxiety and emotional stress — is actually a positive in terms of the individual’s development. And I think that this is a thematic point that lives within every movie or story in which a Protagonist goes through an ascending transformation arc (from Disunity to Unity), that all the sh*t they go through in Act Two is worth it: “Look, see! They survived the Final Struggle, ‘defeated’ their Nemesis, achieved their Goal, and now with the Denouement, we get a taste of their wonderful Unity Life.”
Jung preached a similar thing with his Mind, Body, Spirit, Soul aspects of the human psyche, and how the individual has to engage with each one in order to move toward “union.”
Not every movie has a transformation story at its core, but most do. Some transformations are small, others are huge. Some are obvious, others are subtle. But it’s probably fair to say that most of these transformations echo the above versions of that Disunity to Unity arc, the middle of which is occupied by some sort of deconstruction to reconstruction dynamic. It’s not formulaic, it’s the very nature of change. And whether it’s the words of Dabrowski, Jung, or a military drill sergeant, it’s a pretty universal phenomenon.
For more information on Kasimierz Dabrowski, you can go here.


One of the things I learned as I got older is that what my smart-alec younger self used to think of as trite little homolies (you know, "do as you would be done by" and the like) actually contain an enormous amount of distilled wisdom.
Your post reminds me of "What doesn't kill you makes you stronger", or that we learn and grow through suffering.
Lucy – I understand you perfectly. Using the Basic Training process as an analogy is brilliant!
Great post. I wonder if this "positive disintegration" business is as nuts as Nietzsche's "will-to-power" – when suffering is welcomed as the necessary stimulant to transformation, and one is willing to die in order to live.
Nietz saw sadness as a feeling we get when we face the gap between where we are at that instant, and where we wish to be. A sort of second act low point that needs to be overcome.
But with a Will-To-Power there is no sadness, no low-point. The question is never "what I could have been" but "what I could become, what I'm capable of becoming."
I wonder if it would be interesting to subtract the "low point" from the transformation arc? It might offer a new kind of conflict, one that has less to do with need vs. desire, and more to do with chance vs. infinity.
"Thereupon I advanced further down the road of disintegration – where I found new sources of strength for individuals. We have to be destroyers!"
Nietzsche – The Will To Power