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Movies You Made: "Expiration Date"

I received a nice email from Noah Pohl last week. Noah, who works as an assistant in Hwood, has this background on a short film he shot called “Expiration Date”:

Here’s the facts: I made EXPIRATION DATE for twenty dollars. I borrowed a camera, shot it in twelve hours, and cut it on my laptop over three weeks. It was two actors, myself, a camera and shotgun mike. Basically, it’s Cassavettes-style filmmaking, with a nod to mumblecore. Why did I make this movie? I wanted to do something that felt really real to me. It was part inspiration, part frustration with a slew of films that didn’t emotionally resonate with me (which I think is the curse of death for any film). This short is embarrassingly personal — but in hindsight, I’m glad it is. Paring it down to one sentence, Expiration Date is my tribute to “the one-night-stand” and everything that goes with it. I hope you enjoy it.

Over the last year, the film was picked to be on a show called The Best Short Films in the World. It was very gratifying, since about fifty people watched it when I first made it. After the show, it went up to 2,000 people. Lastly, it made the semi-finals in the 2009 NextTV Entertainment Contest, when I pitched it as a TV series spin-off.

All in all, not a bad investment on my initial $20.

Next time out, I’m thinking of being more ambitious and raising the budget to $22.

Here it is — the short movie “Expiration Date”:

You can go here for the Vimeo link.

If you have any comments or questions for Noah, post them here.

Also if you have a full-length movie or short film that you wrote, directed, produced and/or acted in, and would like me to promote it on GITS, post background info and link here, or email me:

scottdistillery@gmail.com

8 thoughts on “Movies You Made: "Expiration Date"

  1. The scene where they tell their respective stories was partly improvised – both those stories come from the actor's real lives. And the goodbye scene has some improv too.

  2. Nice touches throughout, Noah. Storytelling first to last, as opposed to so many shorts that hide or lose the story underneath a lot of "filmmaking" clutter.

    Eleven minutes very well spent. Thanks, and congrats!

  3. Great structure and editing on your part Noah. When that music cued in at the end- Rrright as he shut the door, that final moment HUgh, I really felt for him. I felt his sadness and even her desire to be kissed one last time. Anyways, I really enjoyed it for the many reasons that I'll just stick to one. It felt real and from the heart. A story worth telling.

  4. you know what i like most about this film? the use of silence and space between words. i always like it when there is air that hangs in a scene between two people who just look at each other. this is just a wicked cool movie.

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