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Great Scene: "Chinatown"

It’s often referred to as a “perfect script”: Chinatown, written by Robert Towne (with uncredited contributions from director Roman Polanski). Looked at one way, it’s simply a murder mystery, but there’s nothing simple about this movie’s plot or the characters, as this famous scene conveys — one of the most memorable plot twists in American movie history:

               EXT. BUNGALOW HOUSE – ADELAIDE DRIVE

              Gittes pulls up in Mulwray's Buick. He hurries to the front              door, pounds on it.

              The Chinese servant answers the door.

                                    CHINESE SERVANT                        You wait.

                                    GITTES                             (short sentence in                             Chinese)                        You wait.

              Gittes pushes past him. Evelyn, looking a little worn but              glad to see him hurries to the door. She takes Gittes' arm.

                                    EVELYN                        How are you? I was calling you.

              She looks at him, searching his face.

                                    GITTES                        Yeah?

              They move into the living room. Gittes is looking around it.

                                    EVELYN                        Did you get some sleep?

                                    GITTES                        Sure.

                                    EVELYN                        Did you have lunch? Kyo will fix you                        something.

                                    GITTES                             (abruptly)                        Where's the girl?

                                    EVELYN                        Upstairs. Why?

                                    GITTES                        I want to see her.

                                    EVELYN                        ...she's having a bath now... why do                        you want to see her?

              Gittes continues to look around. He sees clothes laid out              for packing in a bedroom off the living room.

                                    GITTES                        Going somewhere?

                                    EVELYN                        Yes, we've got a 4:30 train to catch.                        Why?

              Gittes doesn't answer. He goes to the phone and dials.

                                    GITTES                        J. J. Gittes for Lieutenant Escobar

                                    EVELYN                        What are you doing? What's wrong? I                        told you we've got a 4:30.

                                    GITTES                             (cutting her off)                        You're going to miss your train!                             (then, into phone)                        Lou, meet me at 1412 Adelaide. It's                        above Santa Monica Canyon... yeah,                        soon as you can.

                                    EVELYN                        What did you do that for?

                                    GITTES                             (a moment, then)                        You know any good criminal lawyers?

                                    EVELYN                             (puzzled)                        No...

                                    GITTES                        Don't worry. I can recommend a couple.                        They're expensive but you can afford                        it.

                                    EVELYN                             (evenly but with great                             anger)                        What the hell is this all about?

              Gittes looks at her, then takes the handkerchief out of his              breast pocket. Unfolds it on a coffee table, revealing the              bifocal glasses, one lens still intact. Evelyn stares dumbly              at them.

                                    GITTES                        I found these in your backyard... in                        your fish pond. They belonged to                        your husband, didn't they?... didn't                        they?

                                    EVELYN                        I don't know. I mean yes, probably.

                                    GITTES                        Yes positively. That's where he was                        drowned...

                                    EVELYN                        What are you saying?

                                    GITTES                        There's no time for you to be shocked                        by the truth, Mrs. Mulwray. The                        coroner's report proves he was killed                        in salt water. Just take my word for                        it. Now I want to know how it happened                        and why. I want to know before Escobar                        gets here because I want to hang                        onto my license.

                                    EVELYN                        I don't know what you're talking                        about. This is the most insane...                        the craziest thing I ever...

              Gittes has been in a state of near frenzy himself. gets up,              shakes her.

                                    GITTES                        Stop it!  I'll make it easy. You                        were jealous, you fought, he fell,                        hit his head. It was an accident,                        but his girl is a witness. You've                        had to pay her off. You don't have                        the stomach to harm her, but you've                        got the money to shut her up. Yes or                        no?

                                    EVELYN                        ...no...

                                    GITTES                        Who is she? And don't give me that                        crap about it being your sister. You                        don't have a sister.

              Evelyn is trembling.

                                    EVELYN                        I'll tell you the truth...

              Gittes smiles.

                                    GITTES                        That's good. Now what's her name?

                                    EVELYN                        Katherine.

                                    GITTES                        Katherine?... Katherine who?

                                    EVELYN                        She's my daughter.

              Gittes stares at her. He's been charged with anger and when              Evelyn says this it explodes. He hits her full in the face.              Evelyn stares back at him. The blow has forced tears from              her eyes, but she makes no move, not even to defend herself.

                                    GITTES                        I said the truth!

                                    EVELYN                        She's my sister.

              Gittes slaps her again.

                                    EVELYN                        She's my daughter.

              Gittes slaps her again.

                                    EVELYN                        My sister.

              He hits her again.

                                    EVELYN                        My daughter, my sister.

              He belts her finally, knocking her into a cheap Chinese vase              which shatters and she collapses on the sofa, sobbing.

                                    GITTES                        I said I want the truth.

                                    EVELYN                             (almost screaming it)                        She's my sister and my daughter!

              Kyo comes running down the stairs.

                                    EVELYN                             (continuing; in Chinese)                        For God's sake, Kyo, keep her                        upstairs, go back!

              Kyo turns after staring at Gittes for a moment then goes              back upstairs.

                                    EVELYN                        My father and I, understand, or is                        it too tough for you?

              Gittes doesn't answer.

                                    EVELYN                        ...he had a breakdown... the dam                        broke... my mother died... he became                        a little boy... I was fifteen...                        he'd ask me what to eat for breakfast,                        what clothes to wear!... It                        happened... then I ran away...

                                    GITTES                        To Mexico...

              She nods.

                                    EVELYN                        Hollis came and took... care of me...                        after she was born... he said... he                        took care of her... I couldn't see                        her... I wanted to but I couldn't...                         I just want to see her once in a                        while... take care of her... that's                        all...  but I don't want her to                        know... I don't want her to know...

                                    GITTES                        ...so that's why you hate him...

              Evelyn looks slowly up at Gittes.

                                    EVELYN                        No... for turning his back on me                        after it happened! He couldn't face                        it...                             (weeping)                        I hate him.

              Gittes suddenly feels the need to loosen his tie.

                                    GITTES                        Yeah... where are you taking her                        now?

                                    EVELYN                        Back to Mexico.

                                    GITTES                        You can't go by train. Escobar'll be                        looking for you everywhere.

                                    EVELYN                        How about a plane?

                                    GITTES                        That's worse... Just get out of here.                        Walk out, leave everything.

                                    EVELYN                        I have to go home and get my things.

                                    GITTES                        I'll take care of it.

                                    EVELYN                        Where can we go?

                                    GITTES                        ...where does Kyo live?

                                    EVELYN                        With us.

                                    GITTES                        On his day off. Get the exact address.

                                    EVELYN                        Okay...

              She stops suddenly.

                                    EVELYN                        Those didn't belong to Hollis.

              For a moment Gittes doesn't know what she's talking about.              Then he follows her gaze to the glasses lying on his              handkerchief.

                                    GITTES                        How do you know?

                                    EVELYN                        He didn't wear bifocals.

              Gittes picks up the glasses, stares at the lens, is              momentarily lost in them.

              EVELYN

              From the stairs. She has her arm around Katherine.

                                    EVELYN                        Say hello to Mr. Gittes, sweetheart.

                                    KATHERINE                             (from the stairs)                        Hello.

                                    GITTES                        Rises a little shakily from the arm                        of the sofa.

                                    GITTES                        Hello.

              With her arm around the girl, talking in Spanish, Evelyn              hurries her toward the bedroom. In a moment she re-emerges.

                                    EVELYN                             (calling down)                        He lives at 1712 Alameda... do you                        know where that is?

              REACTION – GITTES

              He nods slowly.

                                    GITTES                        Sure. It's Chinatown.

Here is the scene in the movie up through the shocking revelation:

I suspect most of us remember this scene because of the big reveal itself, but the scene is critical for two other reasons. The first has to do with the Plotline: Instead of having Evelyn arrested, Gittes chooses to let her leave with Katherine, a decision that eventually leads to the famous final scene of the movie. The second thing is about the Themeline or the emotional life of the story: For while the plot winds its way through the manipulative schemes of “the powers that be” in Los Angeles, backroom deals and bribes, it is Gittes’ relationship with Evelyn – and now extending to her daughter (and her sister) Katherine – that provides an emotional touchstone for the audience. This pivotal moment, where Gittes learns of the unspeakable horror perpetrated on Noah Cross’ daughter by Cross himself, is a massive gut check for Gittes, who up to this point has not demonstrated himself to be much of a stand-up guy, at least morally. Now he does, displaying a side of his humanity we had not seen before.

Of course, we can’t discuss this scene without drawing the obvious symbolism: What Cross did to Evelyn, literally screwing her, is the same thing that he and his political and business cronies are in the process doing to Los Angeles, laying the groundwork for the sprawling mess the city became, all to fatten their wallets.

What are you thoughts about this great scene from Chinatown?

2 thoughts on “Great Scene: "Chinatown"

  1. In the movie,the line where Evelyn tells Gittes about her father is more mysterious than the line in this draft.

    Only two words are used.

    My father and I … Understand?

    Then Gittes asks her if he raped her and she responds negatively.

    This is teaches us about the power of mystery and subtext.

    Don't you agree Mr Scott?

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