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Great Scene: "Magnolia"

This is actually more of a great sequence: The frogstorm near the end of Paul Thomas Anderson’s movie Magnolia (1999). Written and directed by Anderson, it is currently ranked the #206 in the IMDB Top 250 movies. It’s a complex movie with multiple storylines, so here is a plot overview from IMDB:

24 hours in L.A.; it’s raining cats and dogs. Two parallel and intercut stories dramatize men about to die: both are estranged from a grown child, both want to make contact, and neither child wants anything to do with dad. Earl Partridge’s son is a charismatic misogynist; Jimmy Gator’s daughter is a cokehead and waif. A mild and caring nurse intercedes for Earl, reaching the son; a prayerful and upright beat cop meets the daughter, is attracted to her, and leads her toward a new calm. Meanwhile, guilt consumes Earl’s young wife, while two whiz kids, one grown and a loser and the other young and pressured, face their situations.

This sequence features the “upright beat cop” Officer Kurring (John C. Reilly), “Jimmy Gator’s daughter” Claudia (Melora Walters), Earl (Jason Robards and “charismatic misogynist” son Frank (Tom Cruise), Earl’s male nurse Phil (Philip Seymour Hoffman), Jimmy Gator (Philip Baker Hall), Linda (Julianne Moore) on life-support in an ambulance, Rose Gator (Melinda Dillon) driving in her car, Donnie (William Macy) climbing the side of a building, Stanley (Jeremy Blackman) and Worm (Orlando Jones) — and frogs. A sequence of biblical proportions:

     INT. JIM KURRING'S CAR - THAT MOMENT                 Sequence J

     Jim Kurring drives a few more feet....slows down...then starts      to make a u-turn to go back to the store....

     JIM'S POV - MOVING - THROUGH THE WINDHSIELD.     The car starts to turn 180 degrees......as soon as it is headed     going back the opposite direction....

     ........CRACK........

     From the sky, out of the blue, a large GREEN FROG lands on Jim Kurring's     windhsield.

     CU - Jim Kurring.  Scared shitless.

     POV - Another GREEN FROG slams on the HOOD OF THE CAR.

     CU - Brake.  Jim's foot SLAMS ON THE BRAKE. 

                                                                CUT TO: 

     EXT. MAGNOLIA BLVD. - THAT MOMENT

     CAMERA holds a wide angle as Jim Kurring's CAR SLAMS AND SKIDS TO     A STOP IN THE MIDDLE OF THE EMPTY STREET.

     CLOSER ANGLE, PUSH IN ON THE DRIVER'S SIDE WINDOW.     Jim is scared and sweating.....he looks up, out the driver's side     window....

     JIM'S POV - LOOKING STRAIGHT UP.      It's dark and empty sky.....

     ....hold on him....he looks at the Frog that has landed on     the windshield....it's dead and splattered.....

     SUDDENLY: 

     The SOUND of ANOTHER FROG FALLING FROM THE SKY AND SLAMMING     ON THE ROOF OF THE CAR. 

     Jim jumps.....looks up again....

     ....from straight out of the sky comes ANOTHER FROG falling     DIRECTLY INTO THE CAMERA....it SPLATS....

     ...then another and another and another.....

     WIDE ANGLE.  THE STREET.

     It starts to RAIN FROGS in the middle of Magnolia Blvd.

                                                                CUT TO: 

     INT. CLAUDIA'S APARTMENT

     CU - Claudia snorts a line of coke off her coffee table.

     She comes up and INTO FRAME.  Outside the window, behind her....

     ...a FROG FALLS straight past.....

     She hears the sound and turns around....sees nothing... 

     CU - Profile on Clauida....through the other window...another     FROG falls past, through the tree outside on it's way down.....

     She turns her head again sees nothing....

     BEAT. 

     Another FROG FALLS...she looks...she walks to the window....

     .....A dozen FROGS FALL IN VERY QUICK SUCCESION.....

     She jumps back from the window...stumbles a bit...knocks      over a lamp, which SMASHES to the floor.....her apartment      goes DARK....except for street light...more FROGS FALL and      we hear the sound and see them through the window in glimpses.....

                                                                CUT TO: 

     EXT. CLAUDIA'S APARTMENT/STREET - THAT MOMENT

     The FROGS are falling sort of heavy now....Rose's JAGUAR comes     through it....skids and SMASHES into a PARKED CAR....

     CAMERA DOLLIES over to her....she looks up at them....they FALL     STRAIGHT INTO CAMERA AND ONTO THE HOOD, WINDSHIELD AND ROOF....

     ..Rose puts the Jaguar in reverse and tries to back away from the      smashed parked car.....the bumper's are stuck....

                                                                CUT TO: 

     INT. EARL'S HOUSE - THAT MOMENT

     The CAMERA holds on Earl and Frank.  Frank has his head buried      in Earl's bed holding his hand, crying....it's very quiet....

     CU - Phil.  He's crying a bit standing off to the side.     He looks out the window's and the glass doors and sees the FROGS     come raining down.  His mouth drops and he can't speak.

     Frank doesn't notice.  The FROGS fall in the backyard and into THE POOL. 

                                PHIL                      There are frogs falling from the sky.

                                                                CUT TO:

     EXT. WHITSETT/NORTH HOLLYWOOD MED. CENTER - THAT MOMENT

     The PARAMEDICS are driving real fast down the street.....

                                                                CUT TO:

     INT. AMBULANCE - MOVING - THAT MOMENT

     Linda is on life support stuff in the ambulance.  Looking past her,     we see the view of the road through the windshield -- the amubulance      driver going real fast and just about to pull into the hospital     emergency entrance....

     FROGS START PELTING THE WINDSHIELD.....THE DRIVER SWERVES...

                                                                CUT TO:

     EXT. STREET/AMBULANCE - THAT MOMENT

     A WIDE ANGLE where we see the FROGS falling onto the moving,     swerving Ambulance....one FROG lands so hard on top of the     red lights on the ambulance that it CRACKS....

     ...the FROGS in the middle of the road start to act as a     lubricant on the already wet/damp street and the Ambulance     starts to SKID SIDEWAYS....

     ...it FALLS ON IT'S SIDE. 

                                                                CUT TO: 

     INT. AMBULANCE - POV

     As it falls on it's side and skids a bit....over the Frogs...

                                                                CUT TO: 

     EXT. EMERGENCY ROOM ENTRANCE - THAT MOMENT

     Ambulance skids right up to the emergency room entrance.

                                                                CUT TO: 

     INT. JIMMY'S HOUSE - KITCHEN - THAT MOMENT

     Jimmy with the Revolver to his head...he cocks it back...

                                                              INTERCUT: 

     EXT. SKY/INT. HOUSE - THAT MOMENT

     CAMERA above Jimmy's house, looking straight down and MOVING     towards a SKYLIGHT above the kitchen...a FROG enters FRAME,     falling straight towards this skylight --

     Inside the house,     Jimmy about to pull the trigger...SOUND DROPS OUT.

     The falling FROG comes STRAIGHT THROUGH THE SKYLIGHT, SMASHING     THROUGH....

     ...falls straight down onto Jimmy's head....the GUN GOES OFF      WILDLY.....SMASHES the TELEVISION.......

     Jimmy falls to the ground....GLASS FALLS from the broken skylight....

     ...more FROGS continue to fall through it and into the kitchen     and around Jimmy.....

     ...the BULLET into TELEVISION has sparked something and the SOCKET      it's plugged into CATCHES FIRE.....

     CU - INSIDE THE WALL, NEAR THE SOCKET.     Camera moves in and sees some SPARK and FLASH and FIRE started....

                                                                CUT TO: 

     EXT. SOLOMON AND SOLOMON ELECTRONICS - THAT MOMENT

     Donnie starts to climb up a ladder attached to the side      of the building....near the loading dock area....

                                                                CUT TO: 

     EXT. STREET NEARBY - THAT MOMENT

     Jim Kurring is in the middle of the Frog Rain...he puts his     car into gear and drives down the street....

     ....about twenty yards later and he's out of it....

     ...he pulls into the parking lot behind Solomon and     Solomon.....it's not raining frogs here.....

     Kurring's HEADLIGHTS catch a glimpse of Donnie starting to climb...

     ...Donnie gets scared and FREEZES....

     ...Kurring is oblivious to Donnie for the moment.  He looks in     his REARVIEW MIRROR and sees the FROGS FALLING....

     ...Donnie looks past Kurring and now sees the FROGS FALLING     in a 50 x 50 area in the street....

     ...Donnie looks up... 

     ....FROGS ARE FALLING STAIGHT AT HIM/CAMERA AND THEY KNOCK HIM DOWN      AND TO THE CEMENT.....he falls flat on his FACE... 

     ...Jim Kurring turns his head and sees Donnie, fallen flat face     and bloody on the pavement....he gets out of his car and runs over     to Donnie, through the Frogs that rain down, and picks him/drags     him out of harm and under shelter in the LOADING DOCK AREA.

                                                                CUT TO: 

     INT. CLAUDIA'S APARTMENT - THAT MOMENT

     CAMERA (STEADICAM) follows ROSE as she runs up the stairs to      Claudia's place and frantically BANGS ON THE DOOR...

     Inside the apartment, Claudia JUMPS and SCREAMS at the sound....

                                ROSE                      HONEY, HONEY, CLAUDIA. IT'S ME.                      IT'S MOM. MOM. OPEN THE DOOR.                      OPEN YOUR DOOR HONEY.

     Claudia jumps up and goes to her door in the darkness and     opens it up -- Rose comes in quick, scared shitless...they fall down     and hold onto each other, sweatin/crying/shaking....

                                                                CUT TO: 

     INT. EARL'S HOUSE - THAT MOMENT

     Frank lifts his head and watches the FROGS FALL outside the house.      Earl looks to Frank....he musters something...Frank notices....

     All SOUND DROPS OUT except for the breathing of Frank and Earl.

                                EARL                       You are not what you think you are. 

     Frank breaks down. 

                                                                CUT TO: 

     INT. LAMPLIGHTER - THAT MOMENT

     Stanley and Worm.  CAMERA holds as all around...through the glass      windows...it RAINS FROGS....smashing to the ground.....hitting a couple     odd parked cars...they sit, watching, stunned...in a sort of daze.     Stanley seems almost happy.  Worm shocked, scarred; 

                                WORM                      What is that?

                                STANLEY                       It's frogs.  It's raining frogs. 

                                WORM                       ...fuck you mean, it's raining frogs? 

                                STANLEY                       It's raining frogs from the sky. 

                                WORM                       ....what the fuck, what the fuck....

                                STANLEY                       This happens....this is something that happens. 

                                WORM                       What the fuck is goin' on, WHAT THE                      FUCK IS GOING ON? 

     CU - STANLEY.  HOLD ON HIS FACE extremely tight.

     In the reflection of his eye, we see the Frogs falling....     past the neon sign that reads "Fresh Coffee."

     ANGLE, DIXON.  He comes running into the Lamplighter and over to Worm     and Stanley....he's scarred shitless and frantic -- 

                                DIXON                       DADDY! DAD! DAD WHAT THE HELL IS GOIN' ON?

                                WORM                       Stay quiet...stay quiet, son -- 

                                DIXON                      LET'S GO, LET'S GO, LET'S GET HIS MONEY                      AND GO -- DID YOU GET HIS MONEY? DID                      YOU GET IT?  DID YOU GET HIS MONEY, DAD?

                                WORM                       No, Son...be quiet...be quiet now... 

                                DIXON                       C'mon, Dad.  We gotta just GET HIS                       MONEY AND GO, LET'S GO. Let's get the money -- 

                                WORM                       We're not gonna do that now.  We're                       not gonna do that now and that's over. 

                                DIXON                       BULLSHIT. BULLSHIT, DAD WE NEED                      TO GET HIS MONEY AND GO.

     Dixon takes out a large POLICE ISSUED REVOLVER, AIMS at STANLEY'S FACE.

                                DIXON                       GIVE US YOUR MONEY MAN.

                                WORM                      Son, don't -- 

                                DIXON                       BULLSHIT, BULLSHIT DAD WE GOTTA GET                      HIS MONEY -- 

                                WORM                      -- no.

                                DIXON                              (to Stanley)                      GIVE US YOUR MONEY. 

                                WORM                       Put the gun down, please, boy. 

                                DIXON                       GIVE US YOUR MONEY, KID.

                                WORM                       Son, please, now....

                                DIXON                       DAD -- 

                                WORM                       Please, boy, put it down and it's ok.

     Dixon starts to get nervous and well with tears...he shakes a     little....

                                WORM                      It's ok -- 

                                DIXON                       We gotta get his money so we can get                      outta here -- we gotta --

                                WORM                       That idea is over now.                       We're not gonna do that now. 

     Dixon starts crying and shaking and backing away -- 

                                DIXON                       DADDY, FUCK, DADDY, DON'T GET MAD AT ME.                      DON'T GET MAD AT ME --                                (to Stanley)                      JUST GIMME YOUR MONEY. 

                                WORM                       I'm not mad, son, I will not be mad                       at you and it's ok and please put it                       down and I won't be mad and I won't -- 

                                DIXON                      DAD. 

     Dixon starts to lower the gun a bit, crying and shaking....He lowers     the gun and hands it over to his Father....Dixon is sort of      flinching....the possibility that his Father may strike him... 

     ...Stanley is frozen...Dixon is hyperventilating....

                                DIXON                      I - just - thought - that - I - didn't                      want - I - didn't - I - didn't - 

                                WORM                      It's ok, boy. 

     HOLD.  Que. "Bein Green," by Kermit the Frog/Aimee 

                                                                CUT TO:

     EXT. LAMPLIGHTER/VENTURA BLVD. - THAT MOMENT         Sequence K

     CAMERA holds a wide angle on the Lamplighter Coffee Shop.     Frogs falling from sky onto and around the streets....

                                                                CUT TO: 

     EXT. THE SKY - THAT MOMENT

     CAMERA up with the Falling Frogs....CAMERA is moving down with them...     it becomes almost musical....like Busby-Berkely-style coreography of     Frogs That Fall In The Sky...

                                MUSIC/KERMIT THE FROG                       "It's not that easy bein' green...                      Having to spend each day the color                       of the leaves..."

                                                     CARRIES OVER CUT TO:

     INT. JIMMY'S HOUSE - THAT MOMENT

     It is on FIRE now....CU image of Jimmy on the floor of the kitchen     with shards of glass around him...and FROGS...a few of them      still alive and jumping around...the FIRE moving closer and closer...

                                                                CUT TO:

     EXT. SOLOMON AND SOLOMON/LOADING DOCK AREA - THAT MOMENT

     Jim Kurring and Donnie underneath the shelter area.  Donnie's     MOUTH IS FULL OF BLOOD and his TEETH ARE BROKEN...

                                DONNIE                      My teeff...my teeef....

                                JIM KURRING                       YOU'RE OK...you're gonna be ok....

                                                                CUT TO: 

     INT. CLAUDIA'S APARTMENT - THAT MOMENT

     Claudia cries to her Mom.  Rose holds her and they rock back     and forth.... Claudia cries loud and over and over --

     "Mommy...mommy...mom." 

     Rose calming her and petting her head, "It's ok."

                                                                CUT TO: 

     INT. EMERGENCY ROOM - THAT MOMENT

     CAMERA is with Linda and DOCTORS as they PUMP HER STOMACH.     Follow the process and get to point where it's clear that     she is going to make it, she will not die. 

                                                                CUT TO: 

     INT. EARL'S HOUSE - THAT MOMENT

     CAMERA w/Frank and Earl and Phil.  Earl's last couple     of breaths are short and quick...short and quick...short and      quick...and then he dies.....his eyes are open.....

                                                                CUT TO: 

     EXT. SKY - THAT MOMENT

     CAMERA moves down straight towards the ground...towards the Magnolia     intersection with a LARGE FROG....right before it hits the pavement -- 

     CUT TO BLACK.

Two things. First, this is a great example of cross cutting, moving quickly from one storyline to another to another to another, back and forth in continuous time. It adds to the chaotic nature of what’s happening, allowing us to experience the same event from several different perspectives. Second, obviously Anderson used specific camera shots – and lots of them – to put down onto paper how he ‘saw’ the movie in his mind. But we all know that in a selling script (a spec script we write to sell, as distinguished from a shooting script), the shift has been dramatically away from using camera shots. However that doesn’t mean that we can’t achieve a similar effect by not using directing lingo. For example what if we take this:

     INT. JIM KURRING'S CAR - THAT MOMENT                 Sequence J

     Jim Kurring drives a few more feet....slows down...then starts      to make a u-turn to go back to the store....

     JIM'S POV - MOVING - THROUGH THE WINDHSIELD.     The car starts to turn 180 degrees......as soon as it is headed     going back the opposite direction....

     ........CRACK........

     From the sky, out of the blue, a large GREEN FROG lands on Jim Kurring's     windhsield.

     CU - Jim Kurring.  Scared shitless.

     POV - Another GREEN FROG slams on the HOOD OF THE CAR.

     CU - Brake.  Jim's foot SLAMS ON THE BRAKE.

And write it like this:

     INT. JIM KURRING'S CAR - THAT MOMENT                 Sequence J

     Jim Kurring drives a few more feet....slows down...then starts      to make a u-turn to go back to the store....

     The car starts to turn 180 degrees......as soon as it is headed     going back the opposite direction....

     ........CRACK........

     From the sky, out of the blue -- a large GREEN FROG lands on Jim Kurring's     windhsield.

     JIM KURRING  

     Scared shitless --

     ANOTHER GREEN FROG 

     slams on the HOOD OF THE CAR --

     JIM'S FOOT 

     jams on the brakes -- 

Use secondary slugs to ‘direct’ the camera.

Here is the movie version. Track each camera shot in the movie compared to PTA’s script:

I think Magnolia is a terrific movie and this sequence ties all the storylines together.

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